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I fell in love,
inside of a dream.
And woke up,
with a broken heart.

But it wasn't my heart,
that was broken.

It was his,
and I'll never see him again.

That long haired, pale skin,
blue eyed boy, will forever remain,
a figment of my imagination.

So close, yet so far away.
And I will never be able to apologize,
for my mistake.
D: True story. I felt so empty after the dream, and even though he was from my imagination, I hope i'll get to meet him in real life one day, his name was Marilyn, and I watched him leave, and he never came back, and I felt like a total bitch! Ugh, and what sucks is none of it was real, so I can't say i'm sorry! 
Can you guys relate? 
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:iconceylon-morphe286:
I'm writing a story about a girl who found a boy and fell in love,then one day he saved her by pushing her out the way of a on coming truck. Then she woke up in the hospital and realized it was all a dream. Only to find out that boy she met in her dream died on the same day and time she was hit by the truck, but he died five years ago. So basically My story is like your poem,but with a sick twisted end. XD
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:iconlidsworth:
lidsworth Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
:( That's sad, I'd love to read it when you're though. 
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Ceylon-Morphe286 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015
Thxs,when I finish it ill post it. It's gonna be called nonexistent
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DeathTheGamerGirl Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Student General Artist
:( it's depressing how you gave the story away, I normally learn more and feel more from stories with bad endings. But still, it seems like it would be a read. Are you doing this or considering it? 
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Ceylon-Morphe286 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015
I'm already in progress of writing it down, I'm just kinda stuck,I want the characters to go through a freindship before falling in love. Then poor matthew(the boy) gets hit by a truck.
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DeathTheGamerGirl Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Student General Artist
Mm, I see. I'll watch you so I see it when you finish. :}
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Ceylon-Morphe286 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015
ok, but i warn u, it will be a looonnngggg     time before i get it published or whatever u will call it. XD
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DeathTheGamerGirl Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2015  Student General Artist
I'll wait, I'm good at that
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:iconceylon-morphe286:
Ceylon-Morphe286 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015
wow, i wish i had your pateince. XD, i think i,ll start writing (or typing) the first part of the story and then publish it,then try to think of what happens next.
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DeathTheGamerGirl Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  Student General Artist
Mm, that's good because you already have a story plot. How about the characters? You still need to describe how they look and stuff. 
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Hades-Flower Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2014
This is perfect - it really hit me - my dream is a guy I only know online, and he won't meet me - we both know it has to be this way. 
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lidsworth Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I see where you're coming from with that, and i'm sorry you feel like that, and sorry it has to be that way!
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AngeloDiTriste Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh i had a similar dream about a boy with black hair and dark blue eyes........gah life is cruel
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:iconlidsworth:
lidsworth Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
It really is :(
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LandOfWonder Featured By Owner Edited Jul 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I had a similar dream, but a shaggy, red head. It's so depressing what a dream can do to a person. I hope this person is real. I would love to meet him.
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lidsworth Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Agreed, I would be complete. 
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WrittenRuse Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
Perhaps it was a premonition, I've had those in dreams sometimes. Let it give you hope you will meet him someday~
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:iconlidsworth:
lidsworth Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
hopefully....thanks!
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1018SilvermoonIris Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG... I can sympathize, this is totally beautiful in all of it's bittersweet irony of how fate can be so cruel in playing games with someone's heart
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lidsworth Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I'm glad you can relate! Thanks for the comment!
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Evanescence4var Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student General Artist
this is so beautiful :'(
great job
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:iconlidsworth:
lidsworth Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you!
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Evanescence4var Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Student General Artist
YW Love ur work btw Love 
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Cammie-Pink Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014   Artist
i can relate to this. just when i thought the one i love was going to be there for me forever, he slipped through my fingertips.
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:iconlidsworth:
lidsworth Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I'm so sorry, thank you for your comment. 
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:iconcammie-pink:
Cammie-Pink Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014   Artist
yeah, me too. also, you're welcome.
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diestarlyt666 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014
<3 nyawww
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lidsworth Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
:D
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FutabaMistu Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I felt related as hell,my dear boy (the one of my icon pic.) has always been so kind with me even though I broke his heart not beacuse of cheating,I have never done it before but because I Was denied in dating anyone,but we made a promise ~~~ I wouldn't mind for an eternal wait <3
It is amazing how dreams can be so powerful,People say that They are meant to release our deepest desires and deepest fears as Well,perhaps you get the chance to meet him in real life! Beautiful poem by the way <3 c:
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lidsworth Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Thank you, and I hope you two get back together and keep your promise!
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Koko-pelli Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I've been there. :(
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:iconlidsworth:
lidsworth Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
it sucks...
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Koko-pelli Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i feel ya
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zpickard Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Very well written piece, short and to the point. It holds a lot of emotion in it as well. Very inspiring for my own work. Dreams are powerful, maybe its God's way of telling you to look out. Hope you find him one day.
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lidsworth Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I hope I find him too! Thanks for the comment!
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zpickard Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student General Artist
No problem.
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carolgregoire Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Maybe it was a glimpse into the future...
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:iconlidsworth:
lidsworth Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
If it was, hopefully I can make it better! 
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Complicated-Sin Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it's said that the people we see in are dreams are people we have seen before in real life, at some point. (some people even consider past lives) and i've had dreams like that it's heart wrenching sometimes. and this is extremely lovely :)
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:iconlidsworth:
lidsworth Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I do believe in past lives, and perhaps, he was replaying an old story. Thanks for your comment :D
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Complicated-Sin Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I do too, and perhaps that's what it was, a memory from a past life you shared, also if you believe in past lives you should read the book Brida by Paulo Coelho it's mind blowing :)
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ashleybroses Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so True!
I had a few of these lucid dreams & one time I felt like I was really there & he was there with me, I forgot I was asleep the whole time, that was until my mother woke me up for school, I was really sad that morning but I never forgot about the dream or him.
He came back a few times after that dream, but then he disappeared, I can only hope I can dream about him again & hope that I can meet him in person someday,
let us both hope our wishes will come true someday.
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lidsworth Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Lucid dreaming is pretty neat, I've done it many times before, but this one wasn't entirely lucid. Thanks for the small story, hopefully we both meet "the one" in person!
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AnAwkwardBlue Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
I've actually had a couple of those dreams. They were strange, but nice in a way. 
Maybe your dream was some sort of premonition?
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:iconlidsworth:
lidsworth Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Dunno, maybe it was. Thanks for the comment!
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liveartaslifeart Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
Yeah..
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:iconlidsworth:
lidsworth Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
you can relate? 
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liveartaslifeart Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
Mhm.
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movingslow Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
Similar dream, different outcome. Sitting in a coffee shop with sunlight shining through, I was having the best conversation of my life, she smiled, and I laughed. She was about to say something, then I woke up. As vague as that was, I was happy for the entire day, maybe because I took it as a sign that if I keep looking, my dreams will become reality. 
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lidsworth Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
I just hope I don't go around breaking people's hearts XP
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